This feature was one that I changed dramatically after creating it. I pass my comics by my wife before presenting them to the public so she can tell me if I’m off base or not. In this case, the original struck her as somewhat lewd in nature and containing suggestive euphemisms… although I had no intention of doing so. Regardless, I trust and value her opinion.
I went back to the drawing board and cut out the weird parts, pasted the remaining comic on a new sheet of bristol board, and drew in a replacement gag. I actually like the replacement gag a lot more than the original. Granted, when I created the original, it was stream-of-consciousness so, when I revised it, I put more thought into the gag; much like a normal creator might. I reckon I’m not normal.
In any case, here’s the original one. What are your thoughts?
Hear it!
Jason Salas 